Just read all six parts, and I like the slow build up, which lends a sense of authenticity to the story.
I hope you can keep to the same pace, which makes the story so enjoyable for me.
The concept of the Slut and the Lady works really well to describe Gwen's thoughts
Well done!
English
Just found your exciting series!
I love the build up - makes the story believable!
Slow and steady
Just read all six parts, and I like the slow build up, which lends a sense of authenticity to the story.
I hope you can keep to the same pace, which makes the story so enjoyable for me.
The concept of the Slut and the Lady works really well to describe Gwen's thoughts
Well done!
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