Very good, seductive story! I like that the pace is even, not too fast that the reader feels left behind and not so slow that one falls asleep before reaching the end. Well done.
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the story is just getting interesting so carry on the conclusion and make it raunchy,please.
This is a gr8t story, wish I had that shot wit my ex sis in law, nevr notice her bod til aftr we were ovr. An wen I see her durin parties I get a big tight hug, dammm. Thanx for that thought. Gr8t story
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I didn't want it to end...!
Very good, seductive story! I like that the pace is even, not too fast that the reader feels left behind and not so slow that one falls asleep before reaching the end. Well done.
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the story is just getting interesting so carry on the conclusion and make it raunchy,please.
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This is a gr8t story, wish I had that shot wit my ex sis in law, nevr notice her bod til aftr we were ovr. An wen I see her durin parties I get a big tight hug, dammm. Thanx for that thought. Gr8t story
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