BabySitter Birthday Present

Daddy is pushing his luck with babysitter and the non-consent envelope !

I'm really indecisive, in terms of this story. The author wrote this well and captured a 20 year old woman's POV who's alternately smart/ ditzy, willing/ reluctant quite credibly. What tempers my enjoyment is that I'm old enough to be the babysitter's father.

Were I her dad. I'd be pissed !.Maybe that scenario should be the sequel. Sigh. No vote from me, all confused here

More rape from the author who actually wants people to think he is a creepy psycho! What kind of fucked up person gets off on rape!?!?

Trash!

Today, I was drawn toward this low-scoring story out of natural curiosity. Stories like this make me wonder why there isn't a "0" score in the voting tier!

WOW!

I didn't expect it to turn into a Rape story ... nonconcentual sex is not very erotic but rather disgusting

Well, I think it's funny

I feel sorry for the author when only one out of four responses so far seems to realise this piece is a joke. Poor old Ashson must despair of his audience.

Tough call

Is this a 'rape' story, or is it a 'tongue-in-cheek' satire? I feel confident that it was written as the latter! I DO believe the original protestations of Sweetie that she was not lusting for some Client-Hubby pecker...but she did dependably keep herself one step behind her Client-Hubby assault! A quick knee to the 'nads would have changed the equation decisively.

Given that 'pigeon-holing,' I now decide to enjoy the blissful assumption of 'droit de seignior' rights by G-H, plus the inept 'defense of honor' fighting in Sweetie's mind with her 'how much better is THAT much bigger' considerations!

4*

Just misses

As a humor piece, this just misses. The writing is not up to your usual good quality.
It is still a decent story.

rape? nope. she would have banged him anyway once she figured out what he was packing

all he did was get her into a couple months sooner

any woman who's been fucked into oblivion will be back for more

it's a law of nature

the rape reference took the fun out of it

I agree with the other commenter. Even though it was not "real rape", thus the use of the word jarred even more.

Also, in the "Loving Wives" category I expected the Mrs. to get involved more.

Still gave it a "5" for the quality of writing and hot sex.

Well done

Interesting read and yes it was also funny, tongue- in-cheek humour, would that all wife's were so generous with their husbands fantasies - lucky guy - lol

The kind of birthday present

Rosie gave Fred West. I realise the author is trolling for folk like me and he's got me. There's no humor in rape. 1*

Damn

Rape is not sex. Rape is violence. And the wife was weird. Other than that it wasn't bad.

No Means No

No means no. When she said to stop, it turned into sexual assault and then forcible rape. It doesn't matter that she enjoyed it later. That was just a physiological reaction.