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On satin sheets (Pantoum)

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by Anonymous

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by Oldbear6310/20/13

Excellent

Evocotive, Tod

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by todski2810/20/13

thanks old bear

the form does most of the work interlocking and repeating, so long as you don't mess up the swing lines

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by LesseloovesPeter10/21/13

Mmm

very erotic and provocative.

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by Trixareforkids05/28/14

Hmmm.

Gotta try this form. Don't think I'll be banging that one out though.

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