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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/26/13

Hot - needs editing

Hot! You definitely have potential as a writer. Literotica has a volunteer editor program - your writing could be much more absorbing if you got some help with grammar and proofreading.

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by Anonymous10/28/13

good

great content. need urgency.

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by LesbianChickLit10/31/13

Beautiful Story

This is absorbing and descriptive. Maybe a slight stylistic adjustment to make it more of a narrative and less an accounting?
Congratulations on O, she sounds like a wonderful girlfriend!

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by Anonymous11/01/13

so hot

The story was amazing made me cum all over the bed you and O are lucky to have eachother

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Hot

This was so sexy! I loved you And O. It had my cum everywhere. Loved it

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