I like the way Annie comes into the picture. Clever writing.
I also loved the beginning of a new relationship between the two friends...would love if you continued that story.
nice work. would like to read more of these characters...
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I like the way Annie comes into the picture. Clever writing.
I also loved the beginning of a new relationship between the two friends...would love if you continued that story.
keep writing!
nice work. would like to read more of these characters...
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