by AlanaAllyn
Great story, very well written, and very, very sexy. Thanks
Very good story, the kind of threesome story that I really enjoy. In our world, a threesome CAN happen without any of the three parties being humiliated or degraded, just like this one. It was a meeting that all three could enjoy without feeling like they had to hurt someone. Very erotic, very well-written.
To paraphrase another commenter who has a serious case of "head in ass" syndrome:
"Very good story, the kind of threesome story that I really enjoy. In our world, heroin use is wonderful, the sophisticated and enlightened enjoy it, and it's proof that a threesome CAN happen without any of the three parties being humiliated or degraded, just like this one. Sharing a needle is a deeply bonding experience, and we assume all are healthy since no one would ever endanger another life, mostly because of the vast respect and caring between drug addicts. It was a meeting that all three could enjoy without feeling like they had to hurt someone; how could parents, close friends, or children deny people such a richly rewarding experience? Very erotic, very well-written."
(If you recognize just how stupid that all sounds and can relate one sick behavior to another, you'll then see just how UN-erotic it is.
I gave up after several paragraps because it wasn't written clearly enough to be understood.
Stupid D.Wannabee? His wonderful comments enhance our lives.
So she let another man do what she didn't want her husband to do. That's love for ya, I guess.
Get an editor. Then get a decent plot. A cheating slut wife and a spineless husband.
O my! Shocking! What a pile of garbage.