If this is one of your best then your others must be total rubbish
Poorly written and poorly thought out. Why would she want to lose her virginity to a grubby old man?
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Anonymous10/29/13
Fun story
Comic-con can make strange bedfellows. A mature confident man is what some young women need.
by
Anonymous10/30/13
Beam me up Scotty
More like car wreck than Star Trek.
This writer needs a reality check.
Within minutes of meeting her for the first time, an obnoxious old bastard tells his son's teenage virgin girlfriend to strip because he intends to fuck her brains out, and she can't wait to get her knickers off?
If anyone seriously thinks this is a realistic scenario will they please contact me so I can sell them the Golden Gate Bridge and the Statue of Liberty?
English
Toral rubbish
Your sick in the head
One of your better efforts
Short and simple, but believable and very hot.
If this is one of your best then your others must be total rubbish
Poorly written and poorly thought out. Why would she want to lose her virginity to a grubby old man?
Fun story
Comic-con can make strange bedfellows. A mature confident man is what some young women need.
Beam me up Scotty
More like car wreck than Star Trek.
This writer needs a reality check.
Within minutes of meeting her for the first time, an obnoxious old bastard tells his son's teenage virgin girlfriend to strip because he intends to fuck her brains out, and she can't wait to get her knickers off?
If anyone seriously thinks this is a realistic scenario will they please contact me so I can sell them the Golden Gate Bridge and the Statue of Liberty?
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