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Fit to kill not dressed to kill
I feel fit to kill after such a non ending I actually came back to the story looking for at least another chapter before realising that the last episode was over 2 years ago. A real shame
. it was a good story ( appalling grammar and punctuation) and long enough that i really did expect some form of ending
altho preferably not the drive off into the sunset happy ever after ending??
damn good series - really enjoying it.
On a technical note - you need to get someone to re-read it all - there are some silly auto-corrections that have not been picked up by an editor - probably one a chapter.
Really curious to see how this ends - keep up the good work
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