Gosh I have to go back a many of a year to relate to this tale...I think you have to slow the story down and to draw the reader in.... not a wham bang (screw) story
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Anonymous10/28/13
Stories like this only work if there is some jealousy involved
Otherwise, they are just boring stories about consenting adults fucking. Or worse, a disgusting story about a wimpy cuckold. If you continue this, you might have it pick up in the morning, with Mike suffering from a hangover, and realizing that after he passed out, his disgusting slut-whore of a wife must have fucked a bunch of guys, and all he got was a lousy hand job and a bit of head. He overhears Don and Rita laughing about what a pathetic wimp he is. He leaves and starts divorce proceedings, which is what this couple should have done in the first place. Finito.
Older couple succeed in fucking cuckolds wife. Old stud fill her tight married pussy with his thick hot seed. Cuckold did get a blow job, but now what. What happens next? I see you had Rita getting a good groping of the young sexy wife. Will there be bi sex? Please continue to write about this adventure. Does cuckold become a bit of a sissy? Is Don bi also?
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sounds like some new years eve evenings
Gosh I have to go back a many of a year to relate to this tale...I think you have to slow the story down and to draw the reader in.... not a wham bang (screw) story
Stories like this only work if there is some jealousy involved
Otherwise, they are just boring stories about consenting adults fucking. Or worse, a disgusting story about a wimpy cuckold. If you continue this, you might have it pick up in the morning, with Mike suffering from a hangover, and realizing that after he passed out, his disgusting slut-whore of a wife must have fucked a bunch of guys, and all he got was a lousy hand job and a bit of head. He overhears Don and Rita laughing about what a pathetic wimp he is. He leaves and starts divorce proceedings, which is what this couple should have done in the first place. Finito.
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!
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Older couple succeed in fucking cuckolds wife. Old stud fill her tight married pussy with his thick hot seed. Cuckold did get a blow job, but now what. What happens next? I see you had Rita getting a good groping of the young sexy wife. Will there be bi sex? Please continue to write about this adventure. Does cuckold become a bit of a sissy? Is Don bi also?
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