The Last Princess of Lorrea Ch. 08

Thank you for that
That was one of the best chapters you have ever written for this series
Please post quickly

Thank you

One of my best chapters? thanks! I actually really struggled to write this for some reason... the previous chapter was more fluid and easy to write...
I posted this rather quickly so that I wouldn't torture you guys to badly, after my two week vacation. Chapter 9 is well underway, almost ready to submit it...

Another enjoyable read. I can't wait till these two get together! Thanks

I also really enjoyed this chapter. Caspian is a snake.

Thank you so much for posting a new chapter for one of my favorite stories. What an awesome birthday present!

Another good chapter .....

Love how the way you are developing the relationship between Elena and Henry. You are drawing a good contrast between the protagonist (Henry) and the antagonist (Caspian)!

WONDERFUL!

Too short (and I'm greedy). I appreciate you posting it to appease your fans : ) Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope that Elena will be able to tell Henry what happened. It's scary to think that Henry's father, the King, is as evil as Caspian himself.
FANTASTIC WRITING! A very enjoyable read...thanks again!

Holding my breath until I see Chapter 9!

Hope that hastens your pace! This was FANTASTIC and I can't wait for more. HURRY I AM TURNING BLUE!

thank you

For thinking about us on your vacation...we are all glad to read that you have returned to us happy and rested. You must be...because you just dropped a mega bomb on us in an extra short 1 pager of intense emotions. Poor Elena such a heavy heavy burden. Caspian is an uber-bitch-boy that makes Veruca Salt look like she worked for Mother Theresa. Spoiled bitch. And the king not liking Elena's father...what's up with that...please let it be more than he had a thing for Elena's mom and lost her to him. Let it be that something outrageous.

Developing nicely...

I like the way this story is developing. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Awww you guys!

Reading all your comments makes me feel all warm and fuzzy!
I suggest you guys read some of the comments that people left here... really great!
Don't worry, i'll be "dropping bombs" in chapter 9 too!
Yay for the positive and funny feedback!

So darn good!

This chapter was riveting! Can't wait to see how Henry handles Caspian when Elena tells him what happened before and about the tree incident. Great story. Well told. Legs, you have a gift. KEEP USING IT!!!

SUPERB

Oh my...it was worth d wait...loved it...pls post d next part asap.......plssssssssssss;-)
;-)waiting with a baited breath:-D

Another Great Chapter :D

Wow, all that waiting actually was worth it! I absolutely adore this story, the writing is descriptive and the characters are very intriguing. And what a twist in this chapter! It was really great how you set that up and Capian is really a huge jackass he slaughtered an entire country just because he got rejected really? But I suppose that this just proves how emotionally connected all of your readers are getting to this plot. Anywhosies happy writing! I can't wait to see the next installment!

Longer chapters Please

when is d next chapter cmng?

Pls quicken d next chapter

Awesome

Waiting for the next chapter feels like torcher .... When is the next chapter ???
Can't wait :)

Great story

Love the story line, plot and character development! You have a knack for keeping the reader wanting more at the end of each chapter. Please keep writing! Quickly lol

Sassy

I don't say this much, but can't wait!

I can't wait! But I will. Please more!

Upset

I hate hw this was just 1 page n u r taking forever 2 submit :(

Will She tell him?

What a great short chapter! You hit the perfect mix! Please don't hold us waiting for long!

Super,,

But so dang short,waiting for the next page/chapter???,,,soon please,,,,

So sorry for keeping you guys waiting

I'm trying to add the finishing touches on the next chapter, but between starting a new job with crazy hours and responsibilities, I'm exhausted... but don't give up hope!
Almost there...

Poor Elena, your plight is my entertainment..can't wait for more

Let the coundown begin!

Chapter 9 submitted!
Knowing this site, it should be up in about a week or two.
And again, I love reading your comments, they brighten my day!

cant wait!!!

love you!

Sorry- another delay... pedantic editors...

Ok, so after I spent hours and hours writing the next chapter, the powers that be in Literotica (my editor), decided that there is a punctuation mark somewhere out of place. Where? good question. I now have to scour thousands of characters to figure this out, so I guess the hoards of angry fans will have to gather their pitchforks and torches and make angry grunting noises.
Grrr Grrr Grrr!

Argh .....

My pitch fork is ready ......

punctuation

Maybe you could post the story without fixing the comma, and whoever emails you first with the location of the error gets a hint to the next storyline. :-)
On the other hand, i have my pitchfork ready also. just in case.

Love this!

Please update soon! I love this story. I hope that Elena will open up slowly to Henry. And Henry, wow, prince charming and knight in shining armor in one. Cool! And glad that he's different from his father and cousin and more like his mother Ad wow! They are indeed destined because his mom encouraged him to apply as her suitor but sadly the queen died. Aww! Their fate, their destiny, it's intertwined.
I'm excited for the next chapter. Please update soon! Really!

Still waiting...

I'm waiting for the story to be accepted by the editor after resubmitting. status: "pending"...

In the meanwhile, I'd like to thank you guys for the happy comments. It's always nice to get back from a hard day at work and read your quirky thoughts about my story :)

Super Excited!

I'm super excited to read your next chapter! I hope Henry not only becomes her knight in shining armor but still be a dominate in the bedroom.

fingers crossed its accepted

Jeez punctuation was never my forte! Fingers crossed it will be posted soon.

Waiting

Seriously ! How long does it take them to review?
They know we love your story ... Why can't they just accept and post it ???

My next chapter has finally been accepted!

You guys get your fix... hope it lasts long enough until I finish chapter 10.

yup..

.. still like sister and brother, sorry. I know you're going for the cute and romantic, and I like the story... I just miss Caspian already... or any alpha guy... (could just be me :)