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stunning visuals,
Beautifully wrought piece, tristesse, this piece is so emotionally charged, from dark and sombre, to the shift change in "riot of colours" you can see the flashes of her in that instant
finishing on black and empty was a whirlwind ride\ in one stanza
Every parent who has cremated / buried a child knows
such heart-rending grief & U have portrayed the pathos'n emotions excellently , Tess !! 5-ed .
this is powerfully sad
How well you capture both emotion and color. Shaping grief, painting sorrow.
I like what you've done to this poem
The pace moves like a dirge from the ritualistic and impersonal display of the funeral then transitions to a loud riot of color and emotion in the father's painting. I think you've done a great job of comparing the emptiness of the loss with the emotion of the father's reaction to it.
*****
Five.
i have nothing to add
I only wanted to let you know that once again, you have marked my soul with your carefully chosen and vibrant work. I adore you sweet poet. Keep up the beautiful work.
~ maria
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