I like how it has started, can't wait to see the rest
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Anonymous11/12/13
Proof read!
You show promise. Now, go through your story line by line and fix the small mistakes. For instance: "Tyler stood in a corner talking to his friend Larry about their new science project on the chemical properties of different solutions; they were at a party discussion science! "
Change discussion to discussing.
Good luck!
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can't wait for more
I like how it has started, can't wait to see the rest
Proof read!
You show promise. Now, go through your story line by line and fix the small mistakes. For instance: "Tyler stood in a corner talking to his friend Larry about their new science project on the chemical properties of different solutions; they were at a party discussion science! "
Change discussion to discussing.
Good luck!
A good start, don't leave us hanging around for the next chapter for ages
"to be continued"
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