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by Anonymous

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by Angeline10/22/13

Lovely

and a pleasure to read you here again. :-)

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by Maria239410/22/13

serenity on a page

I'm not a big fan of winter but you make it sound and feel warm and loving. You are always a pleasure to read.

~ maria

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by LesseloovesPeter10/22/13

Really like the snow angel/ice king line.

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by greenmountaineer10/26/13

I enjoyed this. The short lines somehow fit with the season. I might have started a second stanza with the line "I'll be a snow angel" because I think it needed more separation from "Warmth/of one another/"

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