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The 109th Rule of Acquisition

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by Anonymous11/03/13

erotic how?

It's fine as a mildly titillating star trek fic... It's a snooze as an erotic story - not because it lacks sec specifically, but because there is no chemistry OR sex. You must have at least one to make the characters interesting OR get us off... Especially to make us want More.

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