by LesseloovesPeter
In my opinion lesse,
I think lays, should be changed to lies between, to play on a double meaning?
It is short, well-written and rather profound. I truly enjoyed your poem and I have to say, thanks for making me smile. The ending was great :)
~ maria
And when it is caught - Yep, I've been writing too much about that!
On the highway " after you , Jenaab !" & stand for hours insistin' the other Noble should precede him in a show of futile ( IMHO) courtesy !?!
Echoing what Maria said, well done in so few lines. Very profound and strong