Louise Joins the Club

totalf ucking waste couldnt get past the fact that the will ruin relationships and turn the girls into whores and the b/f or husbands into pussified losers. no birth control also means no std control and for the b/f to go along shows no self respect.

hot trash!!!!!

what was this?!?!?! you have issues and need to put this shit in fetish!!!!!!!

Greate

More please! Love this story.

Please tell us what was her next level of love!

not

again the next racist pig

Please keep this going

This is incredibly hot, and has a lot of possibilities.

Every nigga wants white stuff

Really would you want to fuck a nigga lol

Just dumb

I really LIKE cuckold stories, but this is stupid. If there is no connection to reality it's not interesting.

Give this one a leash because it's a real bow wow

While you write well, this is just plain ludicrous. I would write more, but it would be a waste of both of our time. Good luck.

Look forward to the next chapter

totally love this, keep it going! this whole genre is fantasy, so don't let those freaking out about reality keep your dirty mind silent. Would love to see you expand this with other girls in the club, especially the sexy young moms looking to be bred again. Also, see if you can fit in how the girl's family reacts, maybe a sexy parents weekend is in store.

re: Look forward to the next chapter

I just love (yes, that's sarcasm) assholes who just can't comment on a story without trashing others for daring to have a different opinion.

great

unlike the most of the stupid anon's that have never experienced nigga
cock u really do want to beg for it over andover , i never thought i would fuck a nigga let alone beg him but wa i wrong , this white wife still begs

Terrible

Why is it that only black guys fantasize about treating women like shit?

those who like this shit

are as worthless as the ones that think its real life. I have seen blacks act like they are gods gift and most are assholes. If you live for dick size and wish to be treated like trash for eternity be a whore because that is all you are just like the girl in this story.

As usual with this cuckold shit, you can't really tell if it's a self-parody or is being played straight.

Is the author some 15 year old from 4chan trolling the site, or is he really just another miserable sick fuck?

In any case, this paragraph was particularly badly written and ridiculous and made me lol:

"It wasn't that I was gay, or even exactly that I was bi, it was just that the athletes represented the pinnacle of sexuality -- and especially the ones with very, very large cocks. Well, even though not turned on to men overall, the really huge cocks were a turn on."

Interesting

It appears this author finds the cuckold crap found on this site as funny as I do, but it also appears, based on the reaction to this story and the ratings it's received, the actual cucks who write this stuff for real don't like seeing themselves written about in this way. That's also interesting, in my opinion, since they're so obviously into humiliation, both of themselves and of women. But then again, maybe it's just that they don't like to think of themselves as being gay, or as hating women. Anyway, this story shines a bright light on it all.

Well you have done woke the trolls up

And once again they have their panties in a bind. Because of that you got a 4 out of me. You seemed to rush the story some, like you where on a deadline of some sort. This is a good start to a bi cuckold. Another idea is for some cuckolds in the club to be in chastity. Other cuckolds with larger cocks can be the bosses of the cuckolds. Making rules for the bottom cuckolds. Like how long they are in chastity, but for they are let out to milk their balls dry then back in their cage. Bottom cuckolds have to be shaved everywhere. Wear panties. Also they will suck off and swallow loads from the boss cuckolds. Boss cuckolds will fuck bottom cuckolds pussy and breed them. Etc, etc. But boss cuckolds and bottom cuckolds will continue to clean pussy and cock. Suck stud cock and swallow loads when told. Cannot wait for next chapter.

11 inches of black veined meat? Count me IN!

I have never sucked a cock, but I will start with the one you describe here. I still want to fuck my woman, but I would suck his cock. Nice story.

Study of categories?

I read your later story first, the high school version. Even though the stories were almost the same, the ratings vary because of the category you assigned to them. So many of the commenters on the Loving Wives section demand that the cheating wife be punished somehow that they hate it if the participants are shown to like the experience. Virtually the same story got a low rating there.

What A crock Of Shit

Kick this whore into the curb and then buy a gun and shoot the cocksucking asshole dead.

A great cartoon.

Now you know why they call it monkey fucking.