I wouldnt pay heed to the other comments thus far. I thought it was well written with a sense of humor and definitely arousing. I'm hoping you add another to this one as I'd very much enjoy seeing how this plays out with Ruth and Valery.
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Anonymous10/30/13
If only more girls would ask Dear Old Dad!! LOL
I agree that Val should be involved, and that Ruth is ripe for MUCH more....good little fantasy!!
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Anonymous11/01/13
Very good story!
I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up. There is so much more you can add to it to keep this storyline running.
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Anonymous11/01/13
Pill?
No mention of condoms or her being on the pill. Kid is likely to get pregnant from 'learning' about rough sex.
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Anonymous11/01/13
And Then?
I want to see what happened after the girls talked, and which one/or both of the girls get the next spanking, etc.
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Anonymous11/03/13
Could he be dumber?
Could this story be sillier?
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Anonymous11/03/13
Oh those special nights when the grumpy troll has the night off from the corner convenience store and can spam every story on the board. Man, you hate everything. Why do you bother coming here?
To Unicorn: How the hell do you know what a rapiest does? Rape is about power not sex, but some women do have orgasms, that don't mean they like being raped it's just the bodys reaction,
Rape is a crime and a dispicable act against women and the rapiest should be locked up for life and a child rapiest should have his dick cut off with a dull knife and burnt alive.
There are dark sides to it when it isn't asked for or planned.
This story was very well done and pointed out many things to the young lady.
Any negative comments to the writer should be ignored. This is a venue for erotica and fantasy. If a reader doesn't like it they have the option to close out of a story and site.
Yawn....
As I said....yawn....
Val's turn?
Why should Ruth have all the fun?
Well done
I wouldnt pay heed to the other comments thus far. I thought it was well written with a sense of humor and definitely arousing. I'm hoping you add another to this one as I'd very much enjoy seeing how this plays out with Ruth and Valery.
If only more girls would ask Dear Old Dad!! LOL
I agree that Val should be involved, and that Ruth is ripe for MUCH more....good little fantasy!!
Very good story!
I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up. There is so much more you can add to it to keep this storyline running.
Pill?
No mention of condoms or her being on the pill. Kid is likely to get pregnant from 'learning' about rough sex.
And Then?
I want to see what happened after the girls talked, and which one/or both of the girls get the next spanking, etc.
Could he be dumber?
Could this story be sillier?
Oh those special nights when the grumpy troll has the night off from the corner convenience store and can spam every story on the board. Man, you hate everything. Why do you bother coming here?
Kind of funny. Most rapists no all rapists do not try to let the one they rape climax. When a guy rapes someone sometimes the don't even climax.
Thumbs Up
I liked the writing . I'm reading more from this author.
Interesting story
To Unicorn: How the hell do you know what a rapiest does? Rape is about power not sex, but some women do have orgasms, that don't mean they like being raped it's just the bodys reaction,
Rape is a crime and a dispicable act against women and the rapiest should be locked up for life and a child rapiest should have his dick cut off with a dull knife and burnt alive.
Very well done
Rape is a very common fantasy for women.
There are dark sides to it when it isn't asked for or planned.
This story was very well done and pointed out many things to the young lady.
Any negative comments to the writer should be ignored. This is a venue for erotica and fantasy. If a reader doesn't like it they have the option to close out of a story and site.
I enjoyed this. Thank you!
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