Looking forward to the next chapter.
you have it set up so please write chapter 2
Has been written and is awaiting approval. On to Ch. 3. A few parts of this are based on things that really happened. And it since took a while in real life for it to happen, and so it will here too. Thanks for the comments and encouragement.
Love the sensual tension you build it very well. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories. --NjoyIt
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Good Start
Looking forward to the next chapter.
you have it set up so please write chapter 2
Ch. 2
Has been written and is awaiting approval. On to Ch. 3. A few parts of this are based on things that really happened. And it since took a while in real life for it to happen, and so it will here too. Thanks for the comments and encouragement.
Very Nice
Love the sensual tension you build it very well. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
--NjoyIt
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