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Amy Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Dirty talk

I love the dirty talk between them. Will you make another chapter? Thank you from the Netherlands

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by BobNbobbi11/02/13

Well written . . .

. . . but too short. The story needs more substance.

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by TornadoTys11/02/13

Too Short !

Nice to read were a wife is lusting after her husband and not another man.
Story was a little to short, however well written.
Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Great story.

But too short. Look forward to more.

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by Anonymous11/02/13

are you going to

let Jill get a little action too? Although Amy isn't lusting for another man, Jill seems to be and Amy seems in agreement...

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by betrayedbylove11/02/13

Nice

A loving husband and wife making love in their own bed. No anger. No cheating. No lusting after another.

This must be fiction.
Ha

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by LeFrog0811/04/13

(too)short and sweet

Very nicely done, otherwise. I just wish your "chapters" had a few more pages. I like those two characters, Amy & John and I'd like to read more...

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by pfflyerhot05/09/14

I wonder...

Am I the only one who thinks your stories just the right length? Nice work, fafhrd09!

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