All Comments on 'The Spider's Brothel'

I almost didn't read it. The first paragraph alone had me cringing. (Moose in your hair? Really?) Spell check, context check, editing all needed throughout the story. So many run-on sentences and spelling errors. (Infra-red, not inferred). It could be you relied on spell-check too much and just accepted the words it offered. But, the story was great. Would be awesome if it was easier to read.

Thanks for the previous comment, unfortunately I did rush this a bit to meet the Halloween deadline but I did use the spell checker and it sucks, I used what it told me & it was wrong, obviously. Also I am from the UK, we do some words differently to the USA, so that may be why some words are wrong.

looking forward to seeing future works from you you do have a lot of really good talent just need to chip away a bit more of the rough edges .

bad spelling, punctuation, etc. who in the hell cares? the story was just flat out interesting and good reading

I have spent a good four hours editing out as many errors as I could find and I have re-submitted this story hopefully it will be up soon.

A bit dry at first but it reads well overall. I like the daring use of multiple fetish content. Good work.

You heard it first today 10/29/13, I am currently working on the sequel to this story. Excited for this one.

t5his would make a great movie

Thought it was a good story, except for the few errors.

I couldnt stop reading this story right up to the last word.

The whole spider thing freaked me out and I really didnt like the idea but I still loved this story.

I want to be Charlie so bad. I want to be wrapped up in silk and transformed.

I have no interest in men bit after being set free from my silk cocoon, who knows what I will want.