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Rachel and Stephen Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Please make the chapters longer.

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by Bluestars11/03/13

Cute story :)

I like this story, its rating score is way too low. Maybe a genre thing? Too much toys and exhibitionism for the romance crowd and too much romance for the toys and exhibitionism crowd? Either way, it is well written, I like it and am looking forward to the next chapter :-)

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