All Comments on 'Word of Mouth'

One of the best I have read. Couldn't stop til I finished the story again amazing.

Really enjoyed, good style, touching and honest feel

In the last 10 year or so I've read a lot of stories on Lit....Even submitted a couple (2old2kid), but this one is the best I've read. It hit a personal nerve in a good way bringing back some old memories....Very biographical for me. Thanks to the author

Wow !!! This is one of the ,no the #1 story I have read this year !!

Please keep up the great thing you are doing. Thank you

Kempt me riveted.

Well written and kept the real reason for a clinch close with a good ending.

Nico will be a favorite of mine for a long time in attaining a gain for her and her friends.

An amazingly engaging, erotic, funny and loving story.

Great story. The absolute best I've read in a long time.

Loved the story. Very erotic but at the same time so loving and sweet and sad. Just amazing! Thanks for sharing this experience. <3

A very touching story, thanks

Well thought out - well written and a great story

thanks

Either one, this is truly outstanding. Destined for the Hall of Fame.

The story was so real, so loving and so sad all at once. When I finished it I sat here with tears in my eyes. I am a 71 year old man and have never suffered such love and such loss. Thank you.

Best short story that I've read in a while, in Literotica or anywhere else. Kept me guessing, was sexy, explicit, yet mysterious. Great job!

Absolutely outstanding. One of the best stories I have read on lit. Thank you.

This is the most amazing story since Love Story with Ali MacGraw, and Ryan O'Neal from the 70's. I laughed, I loved with them. Then I bawled my eyes out. Please let me know if you write books so I can buy them if they are close to this caliber. Thank you so very much.

one of the best and most touching stories I have ever read on here

Surpasses the high standard of drawing characters the reader can believe, with characters the reader can care about.

W O W .

Unusual, but very touching! Keep up the good work!

What a great read - you have done well

Not the usual, but that's what made it so good. Well written.

The best story I have ever read on here. The characterisation was stunning, the dialogue was realistic, the plot line flowed seamlessly, all in all it was amazing. The ending was heartbreaking (and I rarely feel this way about stories). I applaud you, sir. Thank you.

Wonderful characters, realistic dialogue, medically accurate, and an entirely plausible plot. Easily the best story I have ever read on this site. This work is finely crafted and the care you put into it is evident; this is no small thing. I hope to read more from you.

I need to know if this story is real! It broke my heart.

Best I've read here or anywhere else.

My god. You are a gifted writer. More. Please.

That was beautiful in so many ways. I really didn't expect to be crying at a Literotica submission but there I was with tears falling. It was a beautiful story, beautifully written with beautiful characters. I absolutely loved it and thank you sincerely for writing it and sharing your story.

Another person in tears! I love how you stayed true to the genre and gave the story heart!

Thanks for sharing.

Erotic, poignant, funny, and of course sad. Well written romance.

I haven't bothered to comment on a story on this site in year--until today.

Well written, properly paced, insightful. Wow! If there were six stars, you'd receive them for this story.

Imagine - finding a truly erotic story on this site. Not just fucknsuck.

Well done!

Definitely not your run-of-the-mill literotica story.

Very seldom do I comment but this is an exceptional piece of writing. The sex was well crafted and real, but what sets this story apart is the depth of charecter, which allows the reader to fully relate, the dialogue, and the(gasp) plot. The last is something all to often lacking on Literotica. Having found this silk purse among all the sows ears I look forward to reading all of your other submissions. Thank you and keep the stories coming

This was simply amazing. Had your talent with words I would say more.

wow

the part with the video was heart wrenching, I liked the touch with her having the bloody eye and blown pupil, really hit me hard. keep it up.

I usually don't leave comments, but this is a really good story. This is one of the few stories on thus site that actually has a really story line.

Very well done!

This was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. Absolutely amazing

What a great reminder to us all on how we must make sure we tell the people who matter to us just how much they matter. This person in the story finds a girl who truly loves him, and he demonstrates so much loyalty and respect to her honestly. None of us really know how much it means to other people. The love was still worth the pain of the loss, the time was spent when it mattered most. I thought abut this story since I read it, thank you for sharing an obviously painful moment in your life. By what you wrote at the beginning I am guessing this is a true story.

This is a really good story and shows that we must always express our true emotions to the one we love

Best story on this site.

What a wonderful love story...

Beautifully developed.

At first I was a little weirded out by this story. Nico's openness and somewhat dominating grip on the main character just didn't sit right with me...

But then it all made sense. The video and dialogue Nico uses makes this story pull at your heartstrings and I was struggling to hold back tears by the end.

Beautifully written, gracefully paced, I wish that I had the literary knowledge to pen something like this.

Not the usual run of the mill story indeed...

That was an amazing story! Well done!

All has been said already. I merely wish to express my thanks.

So well written, so loving and so thoughtful. Congratulations on the best short story I've read since being here.

That was a very well written, touching story :)

Original, erotic and the emotional tone to end on is really well done.

Crying like a baby over a porn story. Quite and accomplishment as far as I am concerned.

I've read scores of stories in this website over the past couple of years. Word of Mouth is by far the best. Thanks for sharing it with the world!

It must be the onions, Your Honour! Seriously, this is an awesomely good story; one of the greatest I've read anywhere. I, too, don't comment very often, but I couldn't let this absolute diamond pass without expressing my thoughts.

Someone mentioned six stars - what a tightwad! It's worth at least a dozen.

I cried. Well done.

I cried and I am a bloke!

All I can say. That was the best story I've read on here in a long time. Thank You for sharing.

ever read a story here that I was as moved by. The story made me feel from beginning to end.

This is truly the best story I have read on literotica. I could not stop until I finished it.

One of the best I've read.

And yes, I cried.

Nothing else to say but: Wow.

What an amazing story. Perfectly crafted, communicated and with a twist at the end making it unforgettable. If the author's goal was to make an emotional connection with the reader she was beyond successful.

Whether a true story or not, you layered it with such a wealth of telling details as to utterly persuade the reader. The central mystery was teased out beautifully; the answer revealed with grace and power.

Thank you for the gorgeous telling.

Tears in my eyes as a write this. Thank you

Wish all erotica was like this..... My first comment ever... Great work... And sorry about "Nico"

I don't think I've become so attached to a set of characters over such a short period of time, I had myself a weep at the end. Perfectly crafted and Executed... starting to weep again... Bravo! Bravo! I expect great things from you!

I initially started reading this just to get off, but by the end I wanted to tell other people about it. I wish there was some way to separate all of the explicit material from the amazingness of the story. I just wish it wasn't porn :/

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Bravo. That's an amazing story. The fact that it has incredible sex in it is immaterial; this is really good fiction.

Loved your story. Sex is so much better, when sympathy and caring is present.

I am glad that this is a stand alone story. It will be hard to follow up.

Thanks

sanser6

Man, I don't know. Just don't even know. Your story is probably one of the best short stories I've ever read. Very sexual, very well written and Fuck me but very real. I absolutely never comment on anything but was extremely touched. Maybe my younger first love was similar, idk. Bravo man. That is all.

I am so moved. Utterly beautiful story telling, had me in tears.

Beautiful story, had me in tears.

Just gorgeous

I'm just...I'm stunned. Thank you, I suppose, is what I'd like to say? Thank you.

Such well-paced pathos meshed with first-rate erotica is a rare and welcome treat. Truly remarkable, moving storytelling. Thank you so much for sharing your considerable talent through this vibrant display of raw human emotion. Label me a fan.

I quickly became immersed in the story and invested in the characters.

I was already mentally composing a comment about how fantastic the mechanics and plot structure of the story was, but how Nico's "rebel without a cause" act was so very irritating.

Then he got that video.

"I can't have a boyfriend."

Far from being bitchy or irrational; it was the bravest and most selfless thing she could have done. And the character suddenly made perfect sense.

Bravo.

One of the very few erotic stories that completely captivated me. A brilliant piece of erotica that is rare to find. I'm impressed!

Thank you for your talent.

I.. I dont.... That is possibly the first time Ive ever red erotica and ended up legitimately invested in the characters, enough so to actually cry. I felt pain when Nico died, and happy when Thomas and Kelly got together. I dont know how to feel about this.

The pace and feeling in this story is amazing, you got it just right. Thank you for some excellent and very sensitive writing.

This story was wonderful the flow was perfect and I felt the loss when Nico died. I am glad that I read this story.

Shit. That story reminded me heavily of "The Lily of the Valley" by Balzac. And just like after reading that book a part of me died after reading this story.

I wanted to cry but I held it in. *****

This story is awesome! I came here (No pun intended) to read a story to jack off to, ended up feeling like crying....Totally killed my hard-on but now I'm just all choked up on the beauty of this story, I would of half-hoped that Nico woud come back but alas, at least Him and kelly are together. 2 thumbs up for sure, keep writting!

This was the both best and worst story i've read, ever.

It was the most amazingly well-written, so captivating and involving that i was desperately waiting to find out what happened next. Yet being so incredibly moving i'm now too emotional to cum and shocked by the turn of events. Nightmare!!

Now all i can think about is that i need to tell my girlfriend just how much i love her!

Amazing.

How did you do this?? How did you put something together so damned well-written, so heart-wrenching, yet so fucking steaming hot? I couldn't wait to find out what was holding Nico back, but I never considered what it turned out to be. I felt the delicious chemistry with Kelly and immediately knew she was 'the one.' I mourned Nico with him, and I felt how dearly he cherished the memory of making love with her. Whatever sorcery you conjured up to make you create this, please do it again.

... not what I expected, brilliant none-the-less!

Hot, emotional, well written and beautiful!!

I'm sitting here with my Heart ripped out, blood all over the floor, bawling my eyes out, you SOB (I mean that in the nicest way).

I don't know if I can ever get Nico out of my head & heart now.

That is not supposed to happen on this site ... DKP

PS; hell yes it's been added to my favorites!!

That was an amazing ending. I didn't see anything like that coming. Now I'm sitting at my desk at work, trying not to show any tears. Thank you for sharing that-you have a real gift.

I am new to erotica, and this is the first time I ever felt compelled to comment. The structure of the story was great; the pacing fabulous; the ending so unexpected!

I have been wet since starting to read page 3!

'Nuff said.

Not just great erotica, a great short story! Well done.

This is by far the best story on this web site. Nothing even comes close. great job

Take the time to read this story. You won't be disappointed. The surge of emotions can be overwhelming but well worth it.

Stunning! Great erotica throughout the story, great storytelling, and great dramatic ending!

The story is absolutely mesmerizing. The erotica is sensual and wonderful and hot and sweet all at the same time. This is an incredible story!

(You may very well like Elizabeth Moon's _Speed of Dark_ a great deal.)

This story connects at multiple levels, each of them a satisfaction. Plumbing the internal life of the protagonist produces the excellent flow of the narrative and also lends verisimilitude to the story and the writing.

Delightful!

One of the best stories I've ever read.

I'm in tears both happy and sad

It has all been said by the multitude readers who have already commented.

Right down to the wished for chance to award 12 stars.

Right down to the difficulty seeing to type through tears.

Right down to the absence of toxic anonymous commentators.

A marvel.

That wsd s great story. I will read it again. It had me wanting more. Thanks Nico.