Word of Mouth

Amazing

One of the best I have read. Couldn't stop til I finished the story again amazing.

Wow

Really enjoyed, good style, touching and honest feel

In the last 10 year or so I've read a lot of stories on Lit....Even submitted a couple (2old2kid), but this one is the best I've read. It hit a personal nerve in a good way bringing back some old memories....Very biographical for me. Thanks to the author

Wow !!! This is one of the ,no the #1 story I have read this year !!
Please keep up the great thing you are doing. Thank you

Excellent story

Kempt me riveted.

Well written and kept the real reason for a clinch close with a good ending.

Nico will be a favorite of mine for a long time in attaining a gain for her and her friends.

Amazing!

An amazingly engaging, erotic, funny and loving story.

Fantastic!!!!!!

Great story. The absolute best I've read in a long time.

Just amazing!

Loved the story. Very erotic but at the same time so loving and sweet and sad. Just amazing! Thanks for sharing this experience.

Very touching story

A very touching story, thanks

Excellent

Well thought out - well written and a great story

thanks

Truth or imagination?

Either one, this is truly outstanding. Destined for the Hall of Fame.

I was touched.

The story was so real, so loving and so sad all at once. When I finished it I sat here with tears in my eyes. I am a 71 year old man and have never suffered such love and such loss. Thank you.

Definitely a top story!

Best short story that I've read in a while, in Literotica or anywhere else. Kept me guessing, was sexy, explicit, yet mysterious. Great job!

Outstanding

Absolutely outstanding. One of the best stories I have read on lit. Thank you.

Exciting, thrilling sad

This is the most amazing story since Love Story with Ali MacGraw, and Ryan O'Neal from the 70's. I laughed, I loved with them. Then I bawled my eyes out. Please let me know if you write books so I can buy them if they are close to this caliber. Thank you so very much.

one of the best and most touching stories I have ever read on here

Excellent, touching

Surpasses the high standard of drawing characters the reader can believe, with characters the reader can care about.

Great

W O W .

Great!

Unusual, but very touching! Keep up the good work!

Superb - loved it

What a great read - you have done well

very nice

Not the usual, but that's what made it so good. Well written.

I applaud you

The best story I have ever read on here. The characterisation was stunning, the dialogue was realistic, the plot line flowed seamlessly, all in all it was amazing. The ending was heartbreaking (and I rarely feel this way about stories). I applaud you, sir. Thank you.

Superb!

Wonderful characters, realistic dialogue, medically accurate, and an entirely plausible plot. Easily the best story I have ever read on this site. This work is finely crafted and the care you put into it is evident; this is no small thing. I hope to read more from you.

Real?

I need to know if this story is real! It broke my heart.

Wow!

Best I've read here or anywhere else.

My god. You are a gifted writer. More. Please.

Thank you

That was beautiful in so many ways. I really didn't expect to be crying at a Literotica submission but there I was with tears falling. It was a beautiful story, beautifully written with beautiful characters. I absolutely loved it and thank you sincerely for writing it and sharing your story.

Another person in tears! I love how you stayed true to the genre and gave the story heart!

Excellent story!

Thanks for sharing.

Sad but Compelling Story

Erotic, poignant, funny, and of course sad. Well written romance.

What fantastic writing!

I haven't bothered to comment on a story on this site in year--until today.

Touching, erotic and somehow real too

Well written, properly paced, insightful. Wow! If there were six stars, you'd receive them for this story.

Wow!

Imagine - finding a truly erotic story on this site. Not just fucknsuck.

Well done!

Different, but interesting

Definitely not your run-of-the-mill literotica story.

Superbly written exceptionally touching

Very seldom do I comment but this is an exceptional piece of writing. The sex was well crafted and real, but what sets this story apart is the depth of charecter, which allows the reader to fully relate, the dialogue, and the(gasp) plot. The last is something all to often lacking on Literotica. Having found this silk purse among all the sows ears I look forward to reading all of your other submissions. Thank you and keep the stories coming

Amazing...

This was simply amazing. Had your talent with words I would say more.
wow

wow

the part with the video was heart wrenching, I liked the touch with her having the bloody eye and blown pupil, really hit me hard. keep it up.

Good Story

I usually don't leave comments, but this is a really good story. This is one of the few stories on thus site that actually has a really story line.

Very well done!

Wow

This was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. Absolutely amazing

What a great reminder to us all on how we must make sure we tell the people who matter to us just how much they matter. This person in the story finds a girl who truly loves him, and he demonstrates so much loyalty and respect to her honestly. None of us really know how much it means to other people. The love was still worth the pain of the loss, the time was spent when it mattered most. I thought abut this story since I read it, thank you for sharing an obviously painful moment in your life. By what you wrote at the beginning I am guessing this is a true story.

This is a really good story and shows that we must always express our true emotions to the one we love

Amazing

Best story on this site.

Oh man !

What a wonderful love story...

Really fantastic! Thanks.

Beautifully developed.

Nothing like this!

At first I was a little weirded out by this story. Nico's openness and somewhat dominating grip on the main character just didn't sit right with me...

But then it all made sense. The video and dialogue Nico uses makes this story pull at your heartstrings and I was struggling to hold back tears by the end.

Beautifully written, gracefully paced, I wish that I had the literary knowledge to pen something like this.

Not the usual run of the mill story indeed...

That was an amazing story! Well done!

Incredible

All has been said already. I merely wish to express my thanks.

Amazing story

So well written, so loving and so thoughtful. Congratulations on the best short story I've read since being here.

Brilliant

That was a very well written, touching story :)

Bravo!

Original, erotic and the emotional tone to end on is really well done.