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by Ashesh910/24/13

all i feel is the aching of where you reached in & pulled in my heart

from my chest to crush it with your supreme indifference !!!
----immortal killer lines : excellent [ 5-ed] .

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by LesseloovesPeter10/24/13

wow

This poem reminds me very much of the year I've had...loving and losing, wanting to and not wanting to replay moments. How intense human emotions are, how deep and lovely.

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by MzFly10/26/13

Loved the way you expressed the memories and the pains that tend to blend together after a heartbreak. Great effort & I agree - some very good lines.

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