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by Anonymous

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by killamaiden10/25/13

Very cheesy line indeed. serves u right.

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by killamaiden10/25/13

try this

"i hope you are not badly hurt?"

"when you fell from heaven"
*she wont buy it either but you will make her blush indeed

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by Ashesh910/25/13

Haven't i read this Poem ln

Paris @ the Ambassador's Mushairya .!?! 5-ed
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by LesseloovesPeter10/26/13

Can't believe that didn't work! Were you wearing your wedding ring? That could have been your mistake ;-)

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