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by Anonymous

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by FA_JF11/02/13

Nicely written first piece. Thanks for putting yourself and your story out there.

I'm not a fan of this kind of mind fuck, seems petty and mean hearted to me. Guess I don't trust, 'cause I woulda been outa there. But, that's me. ;)

Hope the mind fuck fans step up and out for you.

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by mel_pomene11/02/13

Another new writer ...

... another fine story! This was most enjoyable - thank you for posting it for us and I hope you will write and share much more with us. Welcome and please have five stars.

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Oh No!

Agree with FA_JF, I would have told them where to stick their juvenile little game and left.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Great story!

This story was hot! Wish I had been the delivery boy!

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by Anonymous02/01/15

Friend or Delivery boy?

Crap either way. Both show he cares and trusts her very little. She is right to not trust him. BTW not well written either.

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