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this is excellent!
I like so much about this, especially the musical "quoting" to me that really gave it a great beat/boost/rhythm and connection. Love it.
Captures the imagination and thought provoking
I can empathize with you on the complexity of the relationship between a mother and her adult offspring
Wonderful!
You writing is amazing! I'm so in awe of talented people that can write such wonderful poetry. The perfect poem for todays rain.
Please keep up the good work!
Doc
BEAUTIFUL!
This is so AMAZING! Deep, Heartfelt and Inspiring!
** I LOVE IT **
MzFly, You are amazing! _ It's Beautiful!
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