6 stars
Think that beats you nonny.
Delightful series that does just get better and better, as has been said.
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Anonymous11/03/13
All those swimmers…
…dripping down towards the proper entrance. Wouldn't be the first time someone got preggers without actual penetration. What if Gabriel dies before the wedding and we have a virgin birth? Oh, the scandal!
Good story, well written, nicely paced. Quite hot. A small nit - if the setting is meant to be England and the nobility of the characters is also of England, then the wife of a Marquess is known as a Marchioness.
Excellent chapter. I absolutely loved the scene where Gabriel found her with Rawlings. Nothing sexier than a man enraged with jealousy and vengeance. And then a strapping! Uuhhhhh!!!! Thank you, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat the whole way. I look forward to more and more chapters!
Love the story and chapter, but I can't help think you really enjoy messing with our heads a little. I mean, leaving us hanging as you end the action so close to their actual wedding (and wedding night).... What's up with that?
On the plus side, it means I still have another chapter (or two?) to look forward to.
Thanks for writing this for us!
by
Anonymous11/05/13
Well worth the wait!
That was absolutely wonderful! Hit all of my kinks, too!!! While I can't wait for the wedding - I really don't want it to end!!! You have such talent. Keep writing.
by
Anonymous11/05/13
love love love it, I cant wait for the next chapter. I really love the way you write :)
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Anonymous11/05/13
loved it!
I agree, just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
lol, 1 star? Really? What about this chapter wasn't like 12 stars? There's a little bit of just about everything going on, I find it hard to believe they had found nothing to like.
I love this series and can not wait for the next chapter please oh please don't make us wait long
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Anonymous11/11/13
Excitement
Hi Goldeniangel,
Your writing is such a guilty pleasure. Thanks so much for sharing.
I can't wait to read more. I have a quick question though. When you describe female arousal you describe a copious amount of fluid. Is that true? Maybe I don't indulge in the 'right' way but I have never come close the wetness that you describe in your stories.
Well sorry for my inappropriate question and thanks again for sharing your talent.
I think it really depends on the woman... and of course, for fantasy's sake, stories often exaggerate the amount of wetness. Personally, I actually prefer sex when I'm a little LESS wet because it causes more friction and I can feel everything a little easier. Some people find a lot of wetness to be more sexy. Sometimes I can get incredibly wet with the right mind set and the right foreplay, but if I'm not as wet that tends to add to rather than detract from my enjoyment. It seems to be fairly individual, both in preference and in physicality =)
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Anonymous11/18/13
Love it!
Love this whole story! Really well written and very sexy. It seems like this might be winding down, but I hope you might think about continuing in some way after the wedding (in a sequel perhaps)! I think a lot of people would like to see that!
by
Anonymous12/01/13
More?
I was wondering if the story would continue?
I certainly hope so, and if not, this was a great pleasure to read. Literally ;)
I typically hate any form of whipping - including belts. But you made me love it this time. The whole scene was sizzling hot. Especially the anal at the end. It warmed my heart (and something else!) to see Gabriel be so careful to treat her tenderly, even when doing something stereotypically rough like taking her ass after whipping it. I just loved this chapter.
Ever since Gabriel began participating in the training, each chapter has had an edge that pushes it to the next level. It's not that Gabriel is a man, where previously Vivian was dominated by a woman. It's that each chapter involving Gabriel carries an extra element of energy and intensity that conveys itself in the writing. The author herself seems to really enjoy Gabriel being on the scene, and her inspiration adds impact to the action. Or perhaps I'm wrong. The change may be due to a subtle shift in the tones of dominance. We've transitioned from a strict schoolmarm Domme to a powerful and intimidating Dom. Perhaps I simply enjoy one form of dominance over the other. Or maybe it's the author's enjoyment which carries through in the writing. I'm honestly not sure WHAT it is. I just know that every chapter with Gabriel has almost leaped off the screen to grab my attention. To the point where I find myself eagerly enjoying scenes which are normally turn offs for me.
Some stories have trouble finishing strong. This one seems to build up until it's most powerful moments are during the climax. Considering the subject matter, I don't think anyone would disagree that it's an entirely fitting end for the series. ;)
English
Excellent work!
Just like the previous chapters, this seems to get better and better with each new revelation. Thank you again and another five stars.
absolutely awesome.
i love your story and this chapter was, for me, your best yet. really, really great work. thank you!
Five stars, what more can I say?
Wonderful
Well worth waiting for!!! I love this series and Vivian and Gabriel. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Just horrible
"1"
Just wonderful
6 stars
Think that beats you nonny.
Delightful series that does just get better and better, as has been said.
All those swimmers…
…dripping down towards the proper entrance. Wouldn't be the first time someone got preggers without actual penetration. What if Gabriel dies before the wedding and we have a virgin birth? Oh, the scandal!
Good story, well written, nicely paced. Quite hot. A small nit - if the setting is meant to be England and the nobility of the characters is also of England, then the wife of a Marquess is known as a Marchioness.
5 stars!!
Absolute perfection. Love this story. Can't wait for more.
Awesome!
I was hoping they would have sex soon! Great chapter--hit all my kinks in one fell swoop. I could really read this series forever.
Hurry up!
Pretty please more like now. I'm so hooked on this series!
This is my favorite story of yours. In love with both of these characters.
Superb
Excellent chapter. I absolutely loved the scene where Gabriel found her with Rawlings. Nothing sexier than a man enraged with jealousy and vengeance. And then a strapping! Uuhhhhh!!!! Thank you, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat the whole way. I look forward to more and more chapters!
Awesome! Love this story
Looking forward to the wedding day!
Now you're just messing with us!!!
Love the story and chapter, but I can't help think you really enjoy messing with our heads a little. I mean, leaving us hanging as you end the action so close to their actual wedding (and wedding night).... What's up with that?
On the plus side, it means I still have another chapter (or two?) to look forward to.
Thanks for writing this for us!
Well worth the wait!
That was absolutely wonderful! Hit all of my kinks, too!!! While I can't wait for the wedding - I really don't want it to end!!! You have such talent. Keep writing.
love love love it, I cant wait for the next chapter. I really love the way you write :)
loved it!
I agree, just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
More please...
Forget 50 Shades....I want to see this movie!! I love this series!! Thank you thank you thank you!!
i would totally watch this as a movie. wtg on another great chapter can't wait for more :-)
Anonymous '1'
lol, 1 star? Really? What about this chapter wasn't like 12 stars? There's a little bit of just about everything going on, I find it hard to believe they had found nothing to like.
I absolutely love this story, and can not wait for the next chapter. Definitely has to be one of my all time favourites :)
Best story I have read
I love this series and can not wait for the next chapter please oh please don't make us wait long
Excitement
Hi Goldeniangel,
Your writing is such a guilty pleasure. Thanks so much for sharing.
I can't wait to read more. I have a quick question though. When you describe female arousal you describe a copious amount of fluid. Is that true? Maybe I don't indulge in the 'right' way but I have never come close the wetness that you describe in your stories.
Well sorry for my inappropriate question and thanks again for sharing your talent.
Wetness
I think it really depends on the woman... and of course, for fantasy's sake, stories often exaggerate the amount of wetness. Personally, I actually prefer sex when I'm a little LESS wet because it causes more friction and I can feel everything a little easier. Some people find a lot of wetness to be more sexy. Sometimes I can get incredibly wet with the right mind set and the right foreplay, but if I'm not as wet that tends to add to rather than detract from my enjoyment. It seems to be fairly individual, both in preference and in physicality =)
Love it!
Love this whole story! Really well written and very sexy. It seems like this might be winding down, but I hope you might think about continuing in some way after the wedding (in a sequel perhaps)! I think a lot of people would like to see that!
More?
I was wondering if the story would continue?
I certainly hope so, and if not, this was a great pleasure to read. Literally ;)
This was incredible
I typically hate any form of whipping - including belts. But you made me love it this time. The whole scene was sizzling hot. Especially the anal at the end. It warmed my heart (and something else!) to see Gabriel be so careful to treat her tenderly, even when doing something stereotypically rough like taking her ass after whipping it. I just loved this chapter.
Ever since Gabriel began participating in the training, each chapter has had an edge that pushes it to the next level. It's not that Gabriel is a man, where previously Vivian was dominated by a woman. It's that each chapter involving Gabriel carries an extra element of energy and intensity that conveys itself in the writing. The author herself seems to really enjoy Gabriel being on the scene, and her inspiration adds impact to the action. Or perhaps I'm wrong. The change may be due to a subtle shift in the tones of dominance. We've transitioned from a strict schoolmarm Domme to a powerful and intimidating Dom. Perhaps I simply enjoy one form of dominance over the other. Or maybe it's the author's enjoyment which carries through in the writing. I'm honestly not sure WHAT it is. I just know that every chapter with Gabriel has almost leaped off the screen to grab my attention. To the point where I find myself eagerly enjoying scenes which are normally turn offs for me.
Some stories have trouble finishing strong. This one seems to build up until it's most powerful moments are during the climax. Considering the subject matter, I don't think anyone would disagree that it's an entirely fitting end for the series. ;)
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