LOL Mutuality story. The wife is cheating with the neighbor man, the husband is fucking the neighbor man's daughter. However the story wants longer plot epilog. I think this is a story begining only. An interesting first chapter...........
The last sentences were these:
It's at this point that I'd like to draw a curtain over the whole incident. I have nothing more to say.
However a story could start after this first chapter.......how they live their life after this?
We have to wait for FTDS, but he writes only sequel after 2 years to publishing date.
Perhaps few have noticed that Ashson's protagonists are bold, even audacious bounders! By the time most are still pronouncing 'seduction,' Ashson's characters are already wiping (or licking) off the ejaculates and other oozies!
I believe the terms 'polite' and 'considerate' and 'patient' are not in his lexicon, and I am just fine with that, to date!
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The Author is not Revenge Story author
LOL Mutuality story. The wife is cheating with the neighbor man, the husband is fucking the neighbor man's daughter. However the story wants longer plot epilog. I think this is a story begining only. An interesting first chapter...........
Unfortunatelly
The last sentences were these:
It's at this point that I'd like to draw a curtain over the whole incident. I have nothing more to say.
However a story could start after this first chapter.......how they live their life after this?
We have to wait for FTDS, but he writes only sequel after 2 years to publishing date.
Not bad but some more detailed descriptions would have been good.
Rape is so much fun
... and the raped virgin ALWAYS has an orgasm (it's a house rule, look it up)
This author has produced an occasional good story when he wandered off into originality. Sure didn't this time, though
Audacious
Perhaps few have noticed that Ashson's protagonists are bold, even audacious bounders! By the time most are still pronouncing 'seduction,' Ashson's characters are already wiping (or licking) off the ejaculates and other oozies!
I believe the terms 'polite' and 'considerate' and 'patient' are not in his lexicon, and I am just fine with that, to date!
5*
ROFLMAO
Great ending! 4*
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