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Mom's Halloween Swingers' Dance #03

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by Schaka11/03/13

sharper breaks

I love the concept of a mother using a porn film to "practice" attending a swingers party and seducing her son. But I think you need sharper breaks between the Tiffany porn film and Jennifer'ss obsession with her son.

I tended to get lost in the transitions.

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by sparty11111/04/13

nice voyeurism twist

this is smoking, but the thing about your stories is the story line is as important as the erotic sex in them. the characters have feelings. Thank you SJP!

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by ChalkyCanberra1970ACT10/16/16

SJP

Thankyou Susan, only new here and you certainly "stirred" me with your story. Beautifully written a dayam girl, you have a wonderful imagination. Thanks again, x 😊

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