All Comments on 'Trying To Remember'

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
rife

with sadness, towards the end there you had my heart in your hands and I felt what you were feeling, if a poem can do that then in my opinion it is worth something,

glad you didn't forget how to write :-)

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
LIFE IN A NUTSHELL RECAP

seed, acorn, oak, aging, lazy 8. TK U MLJ LV NV

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
decline

Well expressed.

MzFlyMzFlyover 10 years ago

Really felt the sadness and frustration in your words. The mood and emotions are conveyed so well. Thank you for sharing your work!

CleardaynowCleardaynowover 10 years ago
Your best poem so far

Good imagery and ideas, well presented

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5 for effort , content

and for pissing off the fag asshole of lit, Dear Annony! Eat shit you pig

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too Bad!!

I see from your bio that you were writing four years after this bit of drivel. I hope dementia has fully hit you and you are completey mindless now! I hate your stories & it's too much trouble to waste my time rating everything 1 star.

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