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Too Short
Thank you for continuing! I felt this was really short, can't wait to see what happens. I'm really anticipating the next parts .
enoy
I enjoy your stories. My only complaint is the time between stories.
Perfect
I felt like I was right there.
Your stories are great. I check everyday for a new one in this series.
Please keep writing
Wow great Chapter yes a little short, but it was great.
Your stories are great. Can't wait to see what happens next.Hope to see chapter 4 SOON...
Good
Looking forward to more...soon I hope
so good.
The wait was so worth it.
Brilliant story
5+* One of the best stories I have read here for a long time.
Still a decent series, but the religious overtone is getting a bit disquieting, considering the way the main characters have played out.
Good writer, but I simply think this series has been drug out much further than it really needed to be and its starting to show the stretch marks. Overall still a decent cohesive story that probably should have been shortened by a few chapters 3/5 on this chapter, 4/5 on the overall storyline.
Barf religion
One big eyeroll with the dads conversation enjoyed the rest though
Amazing
some other people have said that this series is to long, but I love it and love that it is really long 5++++++++!
wow
What a story. Please hurry up and finish it
wow
What a story. Please hurry up and finish it
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