Road Trip Rogue Ch. 04

Scores are being "cooked."

Way, way over rated based on the phoney scores of the series.

dissapointed

story crawled along and honestly was very boring ....

WRITER NEEDS TO STEP UP THEIR GAME

I enjoy reading a story, but these short chapters of extraneous filler have become tedious. Write a complete story and post it once.

Group Sex ... has been from the start

Early on, there was some (not much) interaction between Hubby and Sweetie regarding the extramarital involvement! The story has devolved to explore how many meaningless combinations can be described.

3*

good job so far

pls ignore the negative comments. you are doing a great job. the only problem is that your chapters end without any real action happening. seems like we need to read 2-3 chapters in one go.

i like the direction that you are taking this, with sharon getting jealous of paula. I hope you dont take this out of proportion and suddenly switch to a full blown swingers party.

Keep up the great plot

Scores aren't overcooked...

...it's just that not much has happened to wake up the anoymice so they can 1-bomb it and shit on everything.

Nice easy pace.

Story has devolved into musical chairs with partners and no drama to speak of. Sorry but this is a rather dead subject to try to write about. Group sex stories do nothing more then come up with scenarios to switch partners. It is dreadfully boring to read about. It kind of makes you think the author is just coming up with things to jerk off to instead of actually writing a story. 2*