All Comments on 'Seduction Ch. 01'

by ravaged_wench

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Too brief

Great start but I felt the ending to be too abrupt and did allow the story to develop sufficiently.

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 10 years ago
Very Nice Beginning

But as the previous comment said, a little abrupt. Hope to read more from you as you set it up well.

openmindedwomanopenmindedwomanover 10 years ago
waiting for more

Excellent beginning of feeling intensity. So important to really show how we exhibitionistic types start to lose control...in some situations.. but yes, please take your time, write more... build it up.. anticipation... after all, I barely started touching!

mBrowmBrowover 10 years ago
Bring it on!

Very nice! More chapters, please.

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