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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
A wonderous fruit

It can make the Storm smile and provide a giggle load of potassium. Yep. I like to

see my mind picture of you laughing.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

Smart word play, innuendo, an enjoyable read, really well done. "Shaped like a penis and curved like a smile" gets the prize for best line of the day, and "The color of fabulous happiness," coming as it does immediately after, is a close second.

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