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by Oldbear6310/29/13

A wonderous fruit

It can make the Storm smile and provide a giggle load of potassium. Yep. I like to
see my mind picture of you laughing.

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by LesseloovesPeter10/29/13

Lol!

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by greenmountaineer10/31/13

Smart word play, innuendo, an enjoyable read, really well done. "Shaped like a penis and curved like a smile" gets the prize for best line of the day, and "The color of fabulous happiness," coming as it does immediately after, is a close second.

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by theoncomingstorm11/10/13

:-)

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