getting caught has multiple facets and turn arounds. TK U MLJ LV NV
You held my interest even without detailed descriptions of the sex. It was well written and believable. You could have made it a little more devious (revenge is a dish best served cold) but the confrontation worked to keep the story short and sweet.
Great tale. I'm not crazy about revenge sex but it worked here. A sequel will let Trish's husband know he's not the father of their children but that is just wishful thinking on my part.
I hate cheaters!!!
Talk about getting even and then some.
Started strong, but fizzled at the end. Four stars.
So he basically became a man whore to get even? Hell he took weddings vows too so he didn't abide by them either.
The Cheating Cunt broke the marriage vows, so he had every right to get his own pieces of ass and then dump the selfish cheating slut. He is a real man! 5 stairs
The moment she broke the contract, the marriage was null and void. All that was left was the burial of the marriage corpse known as a divorce. You see, a marriage is not simply a legal issue, it is not just a ceremony, it is a deal between a man and a woman to join their lives together to fulfill their biological destinies. The two most basic instincts are 1. survival, 2. procreation. Absolute trust and faith in your mate is the basis for this deal. The moment the trust is broken to a point where faith is lost, the marriage has ended. The deal is broken. Just as with a business partner that embezzles funds or sell secrets to your competitor - you would be a fool to ever trust that partner again. You see, they are not partner material. Their stupid selfishness makes them unsuitable to be a spouse let alone a parent. Cast them aside and learn from your mistakes!
Certainly a five; easy and fun to read, and just the right length for a quickie. Now for some comments; mm yummy!
I think his marriage was indeed a bad one, but I would have considered reconciliation. Here's why. Jodi certainly absolutely loved him; he heard her decry what she'd done and she'd already diagnosed why. He heard real remorse, and not remorse just about getting caught. Recall she had no clue he heard her comments.
He married her for better or worse. He most certainly loved her; his fury and destruction of the china was proof of that. She appeared to be emotionally unstable thanks in large part to her mother. They had no children; they could have gone for some serious counseling.
I know it would be risky; she might cheat later. There are ways around that; one he could impel her to quit her job, two I have a hunch nothing would encourage a woman like her to remain faithful more than say five or six kids, yes sir barefoot and pregnant, and a formal written agreement regarding fidelity, future child custody, alimony, division of property, etc.
I mean lock her up good. Concentrate on making her happy to be married and faithful, that would mean putting her first ahead of any job other personal ambition, or asinine shit like golf. Do things together, and let her learn to bake cakes and cookies.
I wouldn't have been through with Larry. I'd haul his ass back in town for a long talk. That's one fellow I'd want to keep as far away as possible; he'd have to understand that.
Last, whether he liked Trish's husband or not the man needed to know the truth about his babies. Mr. Larry would be given to opportunity to settle up on that account. Larry wasn't married, but he had a job, so I think he could be could be gotten.
Regarding the revenge sex; that was bullshit. No way would I have touched Trish; she was as big a skank as Jodi. I imagine I would have been on the phone with the other sisters and very likely with their husbands too. I'd want to blow that whole family right out of the water.
Finally keeping Jodi wouldn't make me a wimp; it would make me a man.
when a wife on this site get revenge on a cheating husband by cheating herself. But a man does it, and it is all OK. What a bunch hypocrites. He gets a divorce then he can go out screw anyone he wants. He cheated too. In fact his was far crueler than hers was. Burn the bitch should have included burn the bastard too. Too bad in these stories when they are plotted like this, both parties do not get punished.
I think he should get Trish pregnant, and rub it in his wife's face.
I didn't really understand why he is divorcing his wife. he has her broken, and can fuck anyone he wants, plus she may not be the best fuck of all of her sisters, but lets face it, there's really not any bad pussy, but just like he said, some is better than others.
He would still be able to fuck her anytime he wanted, and she could clean and cook for him, and perhaps mow the grass. Hell, what else could he ever want.
Thanks for the read.
I liked it. No candyass cucks in this one.
I liked it all the way to the middle of page 2, and then the author had to shit all over everywhere like that!
Very good Mutuality story changed to Romantic Revenge Story. So 5*****.
There are four courses of action with regard to infidelity
Become a cuckold for a variety of reasons, not all of them irrational. See JPB. This is a 'settling' option.
Leave her ass. Just go. This is a manly option.
Make the changes in the marriage to reconcile. This is VERY PAINFUL for both parties. This is both 'settling' AND manly. It HAS to be manly, tt's so damn hard. It shows generosity and the higher values of forgiveness. We all need forgiveness occasionally.
OR...we can torrment the spouse for a month and wind up divorcing them anyway. While this satisfies the base instinct and will garner fist pumps from the BTB crowd, let's face it: he was tormenting this woman knowing he was leaving. It would be one thing if he characterized it as 'he couldn't get over this', but he didn't even try.
That goes to malice. He was a malicious person and I don't quite feel safe around such people.
There should be an epilogue where Jodi tells Carl and the other husbands (what does she have to lose anymore?) and in some JPB dark parking lot, they kick five kinds of shit out of this guy and kick his balls to mush.
You guys all fist pump when it happens to cheaters. HE is a cheater AND a blackmailer. So why do you like HIM?
... Alex was maybe the most malicious and vindictive protaganist that I've seen in a story in a long time and he was terrific. There's nothing better for pissing off a woman than fucking her sister or, in this case, sisters. Then to divorce her cheating ass, priceless. 5 stars, well deserved.
Thanks for sharing I like you style.
I really could not feel anything for these protagonists..
I'll agree completely with FD45. In these type stories the husband loses all credibility and moral high ground by acting this way. In the end he is actually worse then her and that doesn't seem like any kind of good revenge to me.
I love the comments about "the evil hubby" and him losing the high moral ground. What a laugh. He discovered the wife he loved has been cheating on him for years, and had planned to continue for the rest of their lives. If she (like her sister) decided to INTENTIONALLY let another man impregnate her, she would have deceived him and let him foot the bill for the rest of his life. She INTENTIONALLY risked his life by having unprotected sex with strangers while continuing to have sex with him without a thought for his health. What if she was infected with aids while out satisfying her urges? And what was so bad about what the husband did? He went out and got some small revenge with other women. He was honest about it from the start. He told her up front what he was doing. He refrained from having sex with her, thereby (intentional or not) protecting her from infection. He never decieved her or made her pay for his affairs. And then he left her after a month, allowing her to move on with her life. She was plotting and scheming to deceive him in order to hold onto him, and have him fund her sex life forever, while STILL intending to continue cheating. Which was the monster?
What he did would be overkill for a single indiscretion. For years of cheating and lies, it's a slap on the wrist.
Her cheating on him freed him from his marriage vows. If he wanted to continue with his marriage. then fucking other women, even in revenge, would have been inappropriate. However, he was intent on inflicting pain on the soon-to-be exwife and he succeeeded admirably.
A month of screwing other women and shutting his wife off would have been appropriate if they were then going to try to work on their marriage.
But to do that, and THEN dump her is too cruel.
This guy's character at home does not match how he is portrayed in the work place. Turns out he is a real asshole. Perhaps one of the other sisters' husbands will put him out of their misery before long. Of course with the way things turned out, I think Jodi will be having some conversations with her siblings' spouses, especially Trish's husband.
Jodi was very wrong in what she did and should have been divorced for it. However, she did not do it with the intent of hurting him. He cannot say the same and his revenge was over the top.
There was nobody to like in this story.
I didn't care for one single character in this story except maybe his boss. Which I feel is a pretty important quality to have in a story if you want to make it entertaining whether it's fiction or not. Thanks for the effort, though.
what are your expectations of being called. TK U MLJ LV NV
I mean , fuck, in real life, if this story were real, would you really give her one last chance? And then turn into a bigger prick than they are? And fuck over your in-laws?
Nobody here to like at all and that kills a story.
loved the revenge, all in all great ending 5 stars!
There is an old saying that when you plan on killing someone for revenge, dig two graves. Ya'll think his activities were secret? Ya'll think his soon to be ex isn't going to talk about it to her girl friends?
With all he has done and plans on doing his reputation is going to be trashed. You spend a lifetime building a reputation and one second can demolish it.
He should have just walked away and do his revenge in the divorce
How could an asshole of the first magnitude such as he is have managed to have fooled so many people for so long?
The only people that usually manage that are in politics, where being deceitful and vindictive is not a detriment and having people to cover up for you is normal, not business where having a good reputation is a must.
When her husband was traveling she didn't want to be at home alone...
Hmmm... if only she had these people who she could have grown up with so she might be close to them that she could have spent time with... I don't know, maybe if she had some kind of... sibling...? Like a sister maybe...?
It wasn't that she didn't want to "be alone"... it was that she didn't want to NOT be fucked while he was gone.
I understand he needed to "do unto her"... and it wouldn't have been possible if he left her FIRST... but now that he has, he should NOT have sex with the sisters... not because it's "wrong" but rather because there's a good chance THEY knew what his wife had been doing and didn't tell him... he should have done to them what they did to him - help destroy their marriages by telling their husbands.
They'd made their choices; let them learn from them if they were able.
I love most of what this author writes, but when the husband turned into a male slut I ended up hating him. Two wrongs don't make a right, it's as simple as that. In a lot of ways what he did was worse than what she did. He obviously didn't inform any of the other husbands that their wives were cheating on them. Not to tell the one that his children were not his was especially egregious. I understand that some feel that her cheating invalidated their marriage vows, but in reality if he cheated the court would have no mercy on him. A man has a tough time in court as it is, to give the wife ammunition to use against him is just too stupid for words.
Was his new job in SF or Chicago? How did he have all this free time to fuck so many women? He waited long enough for the family court to give Jodi alimony based on his new, higher salary. The entire story needed to be tightened up.
Good story. However, you could have painted the asshole husband with some self respect instead of him being sort of a MEGA ASSHOLE I mean sure she screwed around and screwed her own marriage but that's on her he should have taken the moral high ground when it came to his wife. What he should have done was beat the unholy shit out of the jackass lawyer ex old boyfriend.
They were made for each other.
After reading this again, I still think that Alex should have ended up with every social disease available. Sure she screwed a " few " guys from the bar and good ole Larry twice BUT, she didn't rub his nose in it. Yeah Alex needs to have his dick rot off. Of course that's just my opinion.
one of few stories i have given a 5 star... This was just a great story, unexpected plots and ending with the husband serving the papers on his lying whore of a wife
You really do hate it when a male character gets some of his own don't you. And doesn't just take the slut back and make all nice and apologize to her.
The cheating cunt spread her legs any time he left and you don't like it that he gets some pussy too.
Awww, the cheating cunt had to see he was fucking other women...BOO HOO HOO.. poor cheating cunt's lil feewings get hurt?
Well done , Charley
You had him fucking other women so the cheating cunt could see how painful it is all while getting his affairs in order to leave her arse.
You actually had Alex doing the cunt a favour.
Now that she sees how painful, hurtful, and betraying it is, maybe she wont repeat her cheating with the next man that cares about her.
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