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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/06/13

Interesting

Interesting premise to this story. Please keep it going. I will be looking forward to more chapters.

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by Anonymous11/06/13

great read

Please keep this story going, the concept is great.

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by lostindavoid11/07/13

To anonymous one and anonymous two

I'll do my best to keep it coming.

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by Chequamegon08/17/15

Like it

Nice story. Still some minor typos (presents, presence), but keep up the great writing.

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