Walking In on My Daughter Ch. 01

my ultimate fantasy

I have always dreamt of this happening to me. I would love to hear more.

After reading this I called-up my favorite

sub bitch and took-out my frustrations on her luscious azz: the bitch will be shitting crooked for a WEEK, tahnks to Wanda! lol

Beautiful story

You are such a lucky man. what a wonderfully and sexually exciting story. I wish I was in your place. As a man i can appreciate your position. I have never submitted feedback before but your story just got to me.Wow! Gary H

Very Hot Story

Great story. Can't wait to read more!!

lucky girl!

God i wish i was your daughter!

Need More

I liked it, but u need to add more

it was awesome

i loved it. please add more soon!

Thanks

It was awesome! please add more to it so i can finish what i started..

This must be continued

You have to tell us the rest of the story! C'mon man, let it all out!

more please

great storie more please i was jerking off along with dad

UNIVERSAL:

A work of the finest quality easily out ranking both old and new testaments,opening new boundaries,new frontiers such, can not fail to inspire, all nations,all peoples...

WOW! What more can I say.

You're right, it was too short which is why you only get 75%!
Fret not! I have read the two follow up stories and loved them too but I would have liked to read the story where daughter goes down to talk to Daddy.
Nice one, mate
Peter

I like it make it longer.....

email me if you must at midnightwarrior9@aol.com

AWESOME STORY

This story was great. Hope that you continue this story and soon. Wish i was in ur position. I have a hot little sister that i would love to fuck, but i won't even dare go over that line. Who knows maybe someday.Hope u go on with this story. Great story and keep up the good work.(no pun intended)

Sweet Love

Hopefully, this is the start of a special relationship and there will be a chapter 2.

SHORT...BUT SO SEXY!

Loved it....got very hot...instantly...please write more!!

WOW!

Please please write more to this story!
I would love to read about the talk she and her daddy had that afternoon!

Good stuff

great story but you should finish it

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Give me more of this story. It made me cummmmmmmmmmmmm.

WOW. Want MORE

Wow, this was amazing i came so hard, please write more i want to know what happened between u and ur daughter next. great job.

Very Tastee

The sounds, and sights of arousal from your daughter must have been most consuming.
I visualized your daughter on the bed pleasuring herself, and centered on you sitting on those stairs nude and stroking, and what a perfect tastee treat it would be to also sit a couple stairs down as I masturbate and just at the right time, open my mouth as you cum and shoot ,
Look forward to more submissions.
Tanya

It was a good story...

with definite promises of getting very hot. But then I was stunned and stopped dead in my tracks as I read the part where you walked into the bedroom and saw her on the bed.. This is what YOU wrote: "On the bed next to her was my wife and my open toy chest of sexual toys which she had apparently discovered.".....then no mention of your wife after that. Was she there or not?

Congratulations on your open communication

I wish that you would continue this series. Your family sounds verrry HOT! I'm glad that y'all can talk about sex openly like that. Please go on. This bit was gr8, but 2 short 4 me 2 B able to ejacul8, U know? Please continue with the stories, JohnOne! I loved this one. Just, as I stated, it was a trifle short & blue balls suck.

Words

You have a flare for words. But I have to say that I liked it better when you were speaking from the male point of view. It added more intensity. This is the first time I have responded to someones stories so be gentle. -Chuckles- Anyways keep on truckin'. The world needs more writers with style.

very nice

great...i was using my vibrator while reading it and mmmmm...
more details. and next time, how she welcomes your input and help in using the toys.

Yummy!

This made me so wet. More stories please...

Very hot

I dated a 19 year girl last year who's single greatest desire was to fuck her dad.... He'd also walked in on her apparently furiously fucking herself with a large dildo when she was 15 or 16 (she'd lost her virginity at 13 and at 14 was sleeping with married men in their 30s...) It got to the stage where she couldn't cum without screaming 'Daddy!!!!' at the top of her lungs, and once she was almost in tears as she told me how sad she was that she didn't feel her dad was attracted to her, despite her adopting suggestive, semi-clad poses when at home...

hot hot hot

wow your story was really hot.please let us know what happened after you talked to your daughter and told your wife please write a pt 2

Really good

Keep on writing. its really erotic. and I hope we get to red the rest

OH YEAH!

Keep it cumming!!!! Hot stuff. Hope to read more about you and Mom and Sis.

Damn right

Please continue this story asap!!!!!!

Absolutly loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That little story of yours was very fucking hotttttt.......
honestly just reading your story really got my balls on fire and i cant wait for the first chance to jakc off and feel better.... thanks and good job....

ps" please continue your great work "

Basically good story but very confusing as written

If the first sentence of the eighth paragraph were omitted almost all of the confusion and associated questions would be eliminated. The main confusing question after that is "Why is it titled Ch. 01 when it is the only chapter?" After removing the sentence the story is both very short and VERY ENJOYABLE. Wish it were finished, great potential!!!

quality

loved it, would love to see it continued

Awesome

Awesome story made me cum but you
need to tell the rest. Btw when it says
something like 'my wife and my open
sex toy chest' or whatever I think it
means it's his and his wifes chest and
not the wife and the chest were there!
Great story, please write more. (.Y.)
(Boobs)

Yes sir

you definitely need more parts to this story...do i smell an orgy coming on?

loved it

Loved it so far. Please add more. The Daddy daughter dynamic is so hot.

good start

not going to give too much feedback as i see you've already written two more chapters. suffice to say, you've captured my interest enough to go check them out!

Next part please.

Mmm

I'd love to sit beside those too and masturbate :)