All Comments on 'The Couple Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect neighbours to have!!

One gets the feeling that Bethany might well be visiting her neighbor for another lesson, maybe with wimpy Neil, but more likely without, and when he's at work. Now that the precedent is set, I am sure it will be no holds bared!! LOL Great little story!!

honeylicker1124honeylicker1124over 10 years ago
Good story

Gave you 5/5 stars because you had everything spelled right. Good mental image, but the scene could have had more expressive adjectives.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Don't get greedy!

One or two Tough Love flashers a week is fine! More than that starts to cloy! A little, at first...much worse later. This submission gets another five, which I rarely grant to flash tales but usually grant the Ashman's short classics!

Just don't get greedy ... two in one day?

5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Horse shit!

One star, since negative voting not allowed.

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