(Opens mouth, holds up finger...drops finger, closes mouth)
Never mind
by
Anonymous11/06/13
if i had one
wish for this site, it would be that you would fall on your pen and never write again.
by
Anonymous11/06/13
Shocking
What an unexpected, shocking short story. I'm still grinning.
by
Anonymous11/06/13
I agree with Anon
I hope you fall on that pen too. There is nothing ok about the rape shit you continually write and post here. You are a sick fuck and if I was a betting man I bet you don't have a friend in the entire world. People don't like male chauvinist assholes and you are definitely that!
by
Anonymous11/06/13
And sometimes the breaks go your way? Sure, especially when hubby
Breaks your fucking legs for raping his wife or the 6 year prison sentence you get for rape. Or the broken neck that occurred when the wife clocks you with the car iron frying pan.
That didn't happen you say? True; but neither does the bullshit you just spouted off.
by
Anonymous11/06/13
gave it a 5 to offest the assholw annony!!!
keep writing maybe this ass hole will die
by
Anonymous11/06/13
Fiction, Anonymous ... you stupid dick
In real life, you don't get to have sex with someone you just met without consequences, true ... you also don't go having unprotected sex with a stranger in real life ... that's why it's called fantasy. And stories about it are called fiction. Wake up and stop commenting, you idiot. Enjoyable, simple, sexy story, Ashson. Thanks.
As a FANTASY this is great....and its style continues to draw all readers to your prose....note the most vociferous asshole STILL has read (by his own admission!) everything you've written...the poor little pencil dick has NO imagination, NO creativity and was probably (sadly) raised by very strict nuns, who have left him unchangeably damaged.....but PLEASE keep up the FUN writing!! (MAYBE one day some wonderful woman will indicate she wants what your women get!! LOL)
Gave it a 5 since the anonymice undoubtedly shorted you.
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Anonymous11/06/13
re: Fiction, Anonymous ... you stupid dick
Unless you are a superficial, simplistic, ignorant moron, fiction does NOT absolution for omitting logic and reason. It does NOT give you carte blanche to do anything you want without ramifications. Are we to assume you have never watched movie or TV show, read a book or story, without once questioning the story, without ever noticing plot holes?
BTW, making an anonymous post slamming someone for posting anonymously doubly hypocritical and moronic.
by
Anonymous11/07/13
Stupid but funny
Gave it a one because it deserved that, not because of some misguided revenge on anonymous. You guys are worse than morons, you're plain idiots.
English
Blink blink
(Opens mouth, holds up finger...drops finger, closes mouth)
Never mind
if i had one
wish for this site, it would be that you would fall on your pen and never write again.
Shocking
What an unexpected, shocking short story. I'm still grinning.
I agree with Anon
I hope you fall on that pen too. There is nothing ok about the rape shit you continually write and post here. You are a sick fuck and if I was a betting man I bet you don't have a friend in the entire world. People don't like male chauvinist assholes and you are definitely that!
And sometimes the breaks go your way? Sure, especially when hubby
Breaks your fucking legs for raping his wife or the 6 year prison sentence you get for rape. Or the broken neck that occurred when the wife clocks you with the car iron frying pan.
That didn't happen you say? True; but neither does the bullshit you just spouted off.
gave it a 5 to offest the assholw annony!!!
keep writing maybe this ass hole will die
Fiction, Anonymous ... you stupid dick
In real life, you don't get to have sex with someone you just met without consequences, true ... you also don't go having unprotected sex with a stranger in real life ... that's why it's called fantasy. And stories about it are called fiction. Wake up and stop commenting, you idiot. Enjoyable, simple, sexy story, Ashson. Thanks.
Funny.
Short but fun. 4*'s.
This kind of insanity becomes you!! LOL
As a FANTASY this is great....and its style continues to draw all readers to your prose....note the most vociferous asshole STILL has read (by his own admission!) everything you've written...the poor little pencil dick has NO imagination, NO creativity and was probably (sadly) raised by very strict nuns, who have left him unchangeably damaged.....but PLEASE keep up the FUN writing!! (MAYBE one day some wonderful woman will indicate she wants what your women get!! LOL)
Stupid, but funny
Gave it a 5 since the anonymice undoubtedly shorted you.
re: Fiction, Anonymous ... you stupid dick
Unless you are a superficial, simplistic, ignorant moron, fiction does NOT absolution for omitting logic and reason. It does NOT give you carte blanche to do anything you want without ramifications. Are we to assume you have never watched movie or TV show, read a book or story, without once questioning the story, without ever noticing plot holes?
BTW, making an anonymous post slamming someone for posting anonymously doubly hypocritical and moronic.
Stupid but funny
Gave it a one because it deserved that, not because of some misguided revenge on anonymous. You guys are worse than morons, you're plain idiots.
No, I disagree
I'm pretty much a moron, thank you very much.
Just plain dumb
And dumber. "1".
FD's a moron but
I'm a fucking idiot.
Odd
It was kind of funny
I liked it: *****
Thanks for writing. tom anon
P.S. Can you give me Gwen's address?
5 stars!
Good one!
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