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Max and Megan Ch. 04

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by Anonymous11/13/13

So all you did was change it from him shooting her in the bedroom to a drive by shooting with something allegedly to do with drugs?

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by CambriaRose11/13/13

No, that isn't all I've changed. I've fixed things, taken out things that shouldn't have been in there, and I have added new stuff. It may not seem like it because I did keep some of the scenes that were relevant. It is a completely different story now. You'll just have to read the next few chapters once they are posted to see that, I guess. :)

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