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QUITE SEXY
Quite sexy.Funny mix of sex and religion.Told well,very nice.
Thank you
I enjoyed reading your story.
Intresting premise goes fallow & shallow in fantastic locale
It was all about the itch. I'm a huge fan of stories set in Africa & have been there once myself. If you make a point of setting your story on the dark continent, it's almost a crime not to mix in the local color that abounds there. This was a generic affair as described with generic deceptions & generic climaxes.
Read some Theroux, Hemmingway and Rurak ( just 3 choices amongst many worthy ones) and see how it's done.
Odd premise
Sweetie somehow falls in love with an older man with whom she has had no direct contact until after several visits, fairly widely separated! Shortly after they make contact, Hubby asks this older dude to fertilize Sweetie's egg(s)!
Of course, older dude turns out to be a great lover (and, of course, Hubby is not just shooting blanks, but is also not a very entertaining shooter)!
Odd! 4*
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