No better read than a snotty but smart student getting her comeuppance....and the week has just started!! I hope there will be someone back at Clendon will have someone capable of taking over THIS part of Cheryl's education!! Cheers!!
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Anonymous11/07/13
Total crap
Where do you live? Mars? Yes this is fiction and you can write anything. But the reality of the situation is you touch her, you go to jail and you and the school get sued. The fact that this situation would NEVER happen ruins the story completely.
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Anonymous02/06/14
its ficton
I thought the story was wonderful. Yes in real life he would go to jail but it's not real life. Please write more.
English
Impressed!
Thank you.
Home run...and touched ALL the bases!!
No better read than a snotty but smart student getting her comeuppance....and the week has just started!! I hope there will be someone back at Clendon will have someone capable of taking over THIS part of Cheryl's education!! Cheers!!
Total crap
Where do you live? Mars? Yes this is fiction and you can write anything. But the reality of the situation is you touch her, you go to jail and you and the school get sued. The fact that this situation would NEVER happen ruins the story completely.
its ficton
I thought the story was wonderful. Yes in real life he would go to jail but it's not real life. Please write more.
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