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The Neighbour

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by Anonymous

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by CharlieB411/07/13

Nice quick one

On both counts the story and the sex!

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by loboss211/07/13

Short and Sweet!

I like how you keep this moving along. I generally like longer stories but this was just right!

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Awesome

Smiling... this is not an every day event... But this does happen... Thanks!!!

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by Lickideesplit11/07/13

Omission

MJ forgot to tell us that Sweetie was just plain stupid!

BTW - a 60ish widower with a hard nine-incher would have a line of 50s-70s ladies outside his door 24/7 !!!

Probably would not work in Mature because it is SO improbable!

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Enjoyed the story

I do not understand why some people seem to think they are literary critics.
I enjoyed your story and I am hoping you will write another chapter.
Thank you.....

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Run on sentences

detracted from the story. A bit unrealistic, but it is fiction.

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by thebuffalo11/07/13

Good job. Enjoyed it.

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by Anonymous11/08/13

OK the fallout is what?

She will now not trust the husband and accuse him of cheating. Why because if she is doing it he must be also doing it. If he talks to a woman at a party then he must be bopping her. Pretty soon now she will not even want to fuck him because he is a run around. She will justify her actions because he is doing it. Of course he is not and she is just projecting her actions on to him. Will they stay together hell only knows.

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by chief57311/09/13

Lets have more please

He needs to begin seeing her regularly, forcing her to take greater and greater chances. Maybe even restrict her from any sex with her husband. Lots of ways this could go...

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by Anonymous11/13/13

great story

i hope there will be a part two

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by boradda12/05/14

LUCKY OLD MAN

Some old guys get all the luck

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by TexHubby01/25/15

Fucking...

LOVE the seduction!!! I hope he continues to fuck that sweet, tight married cunt and gets her pregnant with his thick 9 inch cock. More!!!

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by devilspy01/26/15

Don't worry about cuckold Mike

He will very soon know that some one other than his little clit dick is stretching his wife out regular. Besides it is good for the old guy and now that she has had his thick man sized meat, she will begin to crave it. Have to have it like a drug. Soon cuckold will watch and begin to help the older stud and his hot wife enjoy the fucking even more.

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by Anonymous07/05/15

My wife also fucked our neighbor.

A similar thing happened to my wife and I. I came home expectantly one day to see my young blonde wife, naked except for a pair of brief nylon panties, down on her knees sucking on our older neighbor's cock. She told me he had seduced her and she had been fucking him almost everyday for about eight months. She had been blowing him every chance she got and said she loved him fucking her. We separated for awhile but eventually got back together. She didn't want a divorce so she never fucked him again after I caught her. She told me he was the only guy she had fucked since we were married although she admitted to sucking a guy's cock when we were engaged and fucking him all night long.

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by Anonymous09/15/16

You must be a dirty old man.

This should be in humor.

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by Anonymous02/04/17

Good story, horrible punctuation.

I realize we are not in English class, but man/lady -- how did you ever get thru high school without any semblance of proper punctuation? Enjoyed the story though!

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