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Her Husband; Her Toilet. Ch. 02

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by Anonymous11/08/13

Abusive Spouse

Tracey is getting pretty disrespectful of her hubby, she has admitted several times she didn't marry him out of love but rather just to own and abuse him as a slave. Not a very healthy relationship. As you've reflected in other stories a prolonged diet of fecal mater can lead to organ failure and death.

When they get back to the main land he should meet with a good lawyer and see about an annulment or divorce with a clause reflecting that in the event she shares any intimate details of this outrageous union. She face charges of blackmail, defamation of character, among other things I'm sure could be conjured up. It's a mater of life and eventual death

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by Anonymous11/09/13

Good read

Yes I liked this story, it got me quite excited. Now I must check the rest of your stories.

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by Anonymous12/12/13

getting there

You are on the right track but need to put more story into the action, people just don't go around pissing and shitting when nothing happens in between. Throw some sex into the mix, some real sex and the toilet stuff will be much hotter.

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by Anonymous06/08/14

Wrong use of word

"Recuperate their luggage", is illogical use. should be "retrieved their luggage from the carousel "

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