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by Anonymous

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by Oldbear6311/01/13

Erotic Vampires

Enjoyed this a lot. Interesting how vampires have become so erotic to females. The ultimate sad bad boy? But yours sound a bit more dangerous, Tristesse

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by LesseloovesPeter11/02/13

Makes drinking blood sound appealing. Very nice.

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by twelveoone11/07/13

ooohhhhh

bite me
I like these two lines
framed in dust and guilty absence
pale arms embrace the incautious
but some are off the shelf
whispering seductive secrets
reducing all resistance

which the alignment of sound could easily have been enhanced by internal rhyme as seduced/reduced as you did with lust/dust
5ed

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