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by Cleardaynow11/01/13

Lovely story, lovely poem

A beautifully painted picture that draws you into a situation, a place - feelings.

And, Old Bear - nothing jars!

Stands out like a breath of fresh air. (Do breaths of fresh air stand out?)

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by Ashesh911/01/13

Old Bear : a very

Norman Rockwellian poem : thank you for sharin'!!

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by LesseloovesPeter11/02/13

very lovely. You do a good job capturing the moment in words, with emotion and setting.

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