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Ashley's Birthday Wishes Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by likewhatshot11/08/13

Very interesting.

Brother and Father. Where there be another story to follow?

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by mike250111/18/13

Absolutely awesome fun story! :)

...the only dig I have is a small a annoyance I see some authors do... When dragging out a word, usually during sex or whining, the author uses consonants instead of vowels and it just doesn't sound right in your head or when spoken.
Examples (ill try and remember a few from here):
'Pleassse?' Should be 'pleaaase?' Or (I hate this one) 'fuckkkk!' Should be 'fuuuck!'
Well you get the point. Usually the only consonants you repeat should be 's' and 'z' and then only if they sound out properly. (Snakes/hissing and sleeping come to mind, hehe)

Anyway, great story!!
Anal Mode: OFF. ;)

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by LUSTYWHEELS12/02/13

Awesome

I love it, but he should tell her that her pussy now belongs to him. When, where and however he wants it

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by Ready2BServiced12/15/13

Rated five ...

Damn i'm wet!!! More!!!!

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by lrogerb12/18/13

Loved it

I cum before I finished the story then I got it up again. Now Ashley needs to do her mother then no one can get mad when the truth comes out why she is pregnant.

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by bigcum01/21/14

to the Anon of 1/1/14... This a site for of age stories. If you want underage tales, GO SOMEWHERE ELSE!!!!

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by Anonymous04/20/14

Ive only ever seen this in one video and it was fucking awesome!!!
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They could see her lips straining against his piercing member. That was mesmerizing enough, but watching her lower abdomen protrude along the path of his cock was mind-numbing. Both could clearly see from the outside Ashley's body yielding while her tunnel accepted his invasion and reminded her that her dad was actually inside her pussy.
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by Anonymous07/26/14

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I agree about the claiming and the mother. This was great!

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by Anonymous12/16/14

Can we say Ch. 3?

This story just keeps getting better. Not into girl on girl, but more sexy time with bro and dad would be awesome.

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by mike250105/26/15

Pretty awesome! Think daddy needs to ditch mrs. Fridgidare and move Ash into the master bedroom ;). ....of course time for the son to get a job and move out, or move in with mom and comfort her after the divorce, lol.

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by Anonymous11/13/15

Ok, you can't stop there. I want more

I want more Please. Maybe DaD and Brother at the same time, or Mom catching them fucking, but I will let you be the judge of that.

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by Anonymous01/14/16

Another!

Please write another chapter!! It's a great story.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Very HOT !

Please add to the story when you can.

Ramjet

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by Icarus9308/09/16

Amazing!!

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by Anonymous08/16/16

Loved it.

Loved it. Hope to see to write more with these characters

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by prop6908/16/16

hot story EXCEPT, GETTING PREGNANT

the sex on the brother and father were great, GETTING an 18 year OLD PREGNANT by brother or father was BAD.

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by Anonymous09/23/16

Well written...

Very good incest story. I'm thinking that another chapter where the son fucks the mother might be fun.I know the mother thinks she doesn't like sex anymore but the son is her first born, and I think it wouldn't be too hard for him seduce her, and of course she re-discovers how much fun sex is.

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by Anonymous11/09/16

fucking hot

please add the mother and son as well, so that if daddy ends knocking her up, the son would get the mom. Maybe she would get intimidated by her daughter's attention and would end up in a sex position with the son because of the clothes choice

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by Anonymous11/21/16

Great story

I can only hope to see more on this story. I would love to read what the dad and daughter do next or maybe she gets her brother to fuck her again I feel his turn was a bit too rushed.

It would be nice if the mom and son hook up too.

But it's your story and your doing a great job so far.

Please continue this story I feel like it could be a great series to add to my favorites.

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