Playing with Katie

Felt rushed

Depends on your purpose, but if you're wanting to create a relationship between these two, it felt very rushed. If your purpose is simply sex, it was fine.

Good start...

Looking forward to seeing the next chapter :)

Good premise. It would have been more erotic to draw out the interaction between them at work - flirting, etc. before jumping straight to getting together in the bathroom. More seduction.

OK

Looks very promising.

GOOD START

Thanks for your story I'm going to be interested to see how it develops. I think you have great potential as a writer. I urge you to use the resources available on Literotica to hone your skills. Good luck. ChristieP

Great Start!

Great start! Can't wait to read, at least, a sequel, if not as series. Sounds like Em and Katie, and us have a lot to look forward, too.

Excellent!

I hope there's more to come!